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MarioConstructor | 35/100

This level was pretty meh..... but not a very bad level.
[Gameplay & challenge]
It has nothing interesting in your level, but it's not bad. I like the castle end idea. But challenges are mess with enemies, which make a level repetitive. Also the level is a bit too short with 140x with challenges. Overall, the level is too very easy.
[Level design]
Level design is quite not good. No scenery. 2 Major cutoffs at (X:98) and (X:104). Castle at the end of level is nice, but also looks like a cutoff. Go behind a castle reveal a major cutoff at (X:182).

Final Score : 35/100 (Bad)
Difficult : Super Easy

[Issue]
*Boring gameplay (-10)
*Quite repetitive (-4)
*A bit short (-3)
*3 Major cutoffs (-15, -5 each)
*No scenery (-23)
*Too easy (-10)

There are many flaws in this level, but 35/100 is not very bad for your first level.

11/21/20 at 10:54 PM

Plume 4.0 | 75/100

This was a not bad first level, but banana325 took most of my words for this review.

11/21/20 at 5:59 PM

Ninjaspinner | 100/100

I will be short. NICE FIRST LEVEL

11/21/20 at 11:30 AM

Banana325 | 80/100

Congratulations on your first level Igames2010! Let's jump right into it.
Gameplay: Your gameplay mostly revolved around dodging enemies which isn't in any way bad. You did a good job keeping the terrain interesting as I see a lot of levels just be flat through the whole thing, but yours had variety in the hills and slopes. Your enemy use is good, and you didn't put too many which was good as too many enemies can be overwhelming. Your challenges were as I said based on dodging enemies but you mixed it up enough that it wasn't too repetitive. I also enjoyed the red-coin ring challenge, those are always a fun way to spice up the gameplay. The only thing I can say is that if I were you I would remove some of the ? blocks and add coins instead in other places.
Challenges: 18/20
Enemies: 19/20
Overall: 37/40
Looks: To start off here, creative pixelart castle at the end of the level, but other than that your level lacked decoration, so try adding some scenery in your next level. There is a tiling error at the large gap where Yoshi is, the floor just suddenly stops and begins again on the other side. Other than that, your level looked nice and had no other cutoffs.
Scenery/Decoration: 4/15
Tiling: 13/15
Fun Factor: Your level was definitely fun to play, so you did good in this category. In my opinion, the most fun gameplay in Super Mario Construct is when you find that balance between platforming and defeating enemies, but focusing on one or the other is still okay and isn't boring unless is has nothing interesting to show off, which you did with the rolling hills throughout your level and diversity in enemy types. I had fun playing your level, so you delivered in this category.
Fun Factor: 27/30
Since it is your first level, I will give you a bonus by giving you one tenth of the points you lost back (I am going to make this something I do from now on). Welcome to Level Palace, and good luck making more levels soon.
Total: 77/100,
With bonus: 80/100
Difficulty: Easy

11/21/20 at 10:41 AM

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